[@Turboshitter] 

Turbo, here are my notes for your character sheet.
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-Please, overall, tidy up your character sheet. I'd like for it to look as professional as a Character sheet can be so that when people come to look at our CS page they can easily understand everything being said.

-Adding onto the last note, I'm having a lot of difficulty understanding your descriptions. It seems the sentences used are a bit roundabout and it would be helpful if you got straight to the point. 

-The picture is hard to make heads or tails of (bu-dum-tiss). Is it possible to find a cleaner version or one that is similar to your character design? The fin, and anything shark like, can be added on in description

- Why all the theme songs?

- Your theme in general needs to be more precise. I think focusing on that could bring up the quality of your character sheet as a whole. It's good now, I think it could be better if it had a straight direction. The theme being as vague as it is now is somewhat in violation of the rules. How is she like Anne Bonny? Who is Anne Bonny? Please elaborate.

-The other rule that a character must be named after a color is also being violated, please amend this.
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Thank you for taking time to consider my points. I'm more than happy to work with you either here or in pms as you please.