[@Abefroeman] alright I will list things as I spotted them. Nation population is good overall, Captial size also good given it's within the Southlands which is the breadbasket of the Empire. On that topic, however, you have to many high population sized large to metropolis sized cities in one relatively small area (this is not even taking into account other large cities from other provinces close by). Reduce them by quite a bit, cutting most in half or more, but the City of Point Break can remain as is.

Military wise, numbers for the standing force is very generous given their population, general rule of thumb for a standing force that won't kill the economy is 0.5% of one's population. Other factors also affect their size, (the south also tending to be more peaceful than the north for example) but it should be reduced to something around the realm of 3,000-4,000 (not counting your navy which size is fine).

I like everything else, however, the Watatsumi cult for example, is very interesting. Strength and Weaknesses also very balanced out. Make those discussed changes and you're approved. ^^