[quote=@CloseEnough] why not? I'll change it a bit but this what her last profile. [hider] Civilian name: Kaite Siree Alias: has no idea Gender: Female Age: 19 Hero or villain: Hero, but dose not know if she should be there at all. Civilian looks: [hider=Kaite][img]https://40.media.tumblr.com/d50b48d74e32f28476d07de5aeb345b8/tumblr_mufr15r2Uy1s7j027o1_500.jpg[/img][/hider] Has pale red eyes that are said to have been unnerving to look at so she keeps her eyes closed. Stands in at 5'6 weighs in at 132 pounds whereas riding jeans and T shirts, likes comfortability over appearance. Her family had to make her show outfits and desinge her costume just in case she had to use her abilities in public. Costume:[hider=mask][img]http://www.2expertsdesign.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/ADMFW11.jpg[/img][/hider] [hider=bottom][img]http://orig02.deviantart.net/a44b/f/2010/030/2/e/dark_rider_by_one_vox.jpg[/img][/hider] Allows her to gain mobility needed for her style. Her belt holds three books that she uses as a catalyst for her abilities. Powers: Kaite is able to recite tales that shes been told and bring forth parts of it to the real world. This is limited to pieces that have a particularly strong impact on her. Separated in three books for memories which are tales for past events, fears that are tales that caused her pain or terror and dreams which are things she thought herself, she can have creatures or objects from the stories help her. Weakness is this can only work so long as she is sound in mind. If someone plays on her fears and it works than the creatures would turn on her in an instant, only way to stop them is to close the book she has open. So far she can only bring forth things that resemble what is here in the real world and are often simple outlines due to her inability to see. Skills: Due to her family she is an amazing horse back rider, her hearing is stronger than normal and has an amazing memory. Personality: A calming personality, Kaite is a soft spoken woman that usually speaks in riddles. Is almost never seen angry and hardly ever raises her voice. Shes someone who can almost always keep a level head but because of her strange appearance accompanied by her voice many tend to give her a wide girth. Though those that know her will say everything changes when shes riding. Bio: Kaite was born into the business of horses. Her father a trick rider and her mother a cross country racer the two were a power house in the horse world. Before she was even born they were getting her ready with what style and what horse she would ride only for their dreams to be crushed when they saw her for the first time. A tiny albino who's retinas never even developed leaving her blind. yet that did not stop the Siree from living up to her family's potential. Every night her mother would read her a story, and feeling through her family’s barn she would speak to the animals inside and tell them the tales in a vivid imagination that she alone could see. It gave her a connection with them. At age 4 she was already riding, and at age six she was competing in not only trick riding, but cross country and dressage. Staying obsessed with telling her companions the tales that were told to her she began to create her own, her parents staying up for hours to write down the girl's vivid imagination in Braille so that she could go back and read it herself. Her dreams, her memories, her nightmares, everything that happened that left a impact would go down in Braille in one of her many books. At age 13 she was already on the fast track to compete in the Olympics, her book open she listened to the nickering of her stallion. Her words echoing through the stall, a tale of a black fox that could never be caught, only to hear the cry of one such creature. Her horse spooking at the strange sight of a shadow of a fox, the animal ended up kicking her, her team thinking that she broke her leg ended up pulling her out of the show. Its still only known by a few that one of the Olympic riders has ability. Now its being covered up as much as possible. Fear dancing in her families eyes that someone would believe that her powers aloud her to gain the upper hand in sports. Theme outside of battle: [youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=b4CjB-7IT4o[/youtube] battle theme: [youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k5X0v7h5kWQ[/youtube][/hider] [/quote] Interesting character. She does need some touching-up, I see a few grammar issues and typos that need to be fixed but otherwise I like the idea.