[quote=@Sigma]
I think he means dune-like as in the whole space feudalism. Royal Houses controlling worlds and systems in the dozens or hundreds rather then patches of land.
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Exactly!

[quote=@Lauder]
So much of the interest right now!
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Glad to see it!

[quote=@Sigma]
This has my interest :)
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Awesome!

Also, just some things I forgot to mention.
The Story will have some yearly galactic council where all of the leaders (who decide to go) will meet at the capital of one of the civilizations. 
I also added two things to the NS:
The First was Government Description and the Second was Cultural/Religious Description