[quote=@Kouki] [@xGoblinKingx]Alright, remember that you only have 1 specialty, this is what you are most efficient in which you just said was stealth also remember that what you use your stream isn't a skill so you wouldn't use your Stream in the description. Everything else, those other skills are listed in "other" so your skills piece should look like- Skills Specialty: Infiltration. Agent Zephyr specializes in stealth. While at times goofy and casual, he can sneak through the shadows without anyone noticing with light feet and a controlled breath. Others: -Survivalist: He's not a trained medic but if needed he can stitch himself up -CQC:Hatchets: He is extensively trained with his hatchets in close quarters combat. [hr] As for your Stream, everything you listed for your Skills should be here. What you use your stream for and its limitations should go with manifestation, giving us a short description of just what you mean. It should look something like this- Stream- Manifestation: Line of sight teleportation- Agent Zephyr's stream allows him to easily gain access to well guarded locations undetected. With the ability to move instantaneously across short distances, Zephyr can execute irregular combat strategies and take out several enemies at an amazing speed. Purity:7 I also need to know how far you can teleport because, with how you plan on using it, you might not want to have a purity of 7...that might kill you.. Really, the only fault I see with this is, essentially,[b] where[/b] you put your information, not even the information itself. So, good job on the CS, I think he'll be a fine addition. Though, I might give a little more meat to his backstory. I plan on doing the same with Neptune. [@Fubsy]We still have room for more!! YES!! MORE PEOPLE!!!YAAAAAAYYY!!!! [/quote] Alright, I'll start working on some edits, as far as the bacstory I just kind of tried to match your character close as I could.