[quote=@xGoblinKingx]
Alright, I'll start working on some edits, as far as the backstory I just kind of tried to match your character close as I could.
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You don't have to add more if you don't want to, I'm only adding more to mine because it felt lacking. If you don't feel the same way about yours than don't worry about it, we'll learn more about you as time goes on.