Did I mess up or do I need to elaborate, etc? Tried to keep the character as close as possible to the original incarnation.

[list][*][b]Name[/b]: Serah Gene
[*][b]Appearance[/b]: [url=http://dreamself.me/full.php?fg=0&ffg=0&bg=0&back=0&hat=10485682&accen=0&face=10495655&hair=10599903&accef=0&pose=0&top=10416733&coat=10341192&acceh=0&bottom=50005862&shoe=0&bodycolor=17000198&action=change&id=0&]Guess who's back? Serah's back.[/url]
[*][b]Gender[/b]: Female
[*][b]Age[/b]: 16
[*][b]Experience[/b]: 41%
[*][b]Synchronization Rate[/b]: 67%
[*][b]Personality[/b]: Very open and eager to meet new people, always puts on a bright face. Just a little bundle of joy on the outside shell. Doesn't seem to break easily out in the open, but is a fragile little flower on her own.
[*][b]Background[/b]: When she was about 9, she got in an... Accident. The cruxi were on hunt again, attacking spaceships to get closer to the homeworld... One of them was a cruiser. Serah was taken out to see space from up close, enjoying every minute of the wonderful sights and with her entire family to boot... Until an explosion hit the front. Suddenly everything got out of control, she doesn't really... Remember much at all of the accident. Just that she and several others were launched in escape pods, shooting back down to the base in hopes of survival while the rest... ...Yeah. For the next 7 years the survivor was forced to be orphaned, although even in the bad circumstances she took it well. Not because she really felt it, but more like Serah had to. Everyone else seemed so sad... Someone needed to cheer them up, right? Nothing wrong with that.
...Nothing at all.
[*][b]Notable Deaths[/b]: No friends, but her entire family did get blown. In particular, her brother's loss hit her hard. 
[*][b]Other things[/b]: She's very fond of card games, and doesn't like music that's slow and takes time to build up.
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[*][b]Framewerk Code Name[/b]: AA-XOTRY. Serah calls it Atty.
[*][b]Appearance[/b]: [url=http://static.eclypsia.com/public/upload/cke/Games/Lol/New%20Skins%20Summer%202014/Mecha%20Aatrox/mecha_aatrox_screen8.jpg]Just imagine it bigger.[/url]
[*][b]Number of Framewerk Systems[/b]: Two.
[*][b]Signature Weapon System[/b]: The blade you see can be retracted at any time and is also able to shoot out sickle-like projectiles when swung. It takes away a part of the blade's energy which is used to generate the edge, although by taking some energy from the core it can be immediately reversed. Using this too much would quickly have it run out of energy, though.
[*][b]Secondary Weapon System[/b]: The wings on its back aren't for show, they're reflector barriers meant to repel/block attacks. They can detach and move on their own via some technology, as long as it stays within close range of AA-XOTRY.
[*][b]Weight Class[/b]: Light and fast, though extremely fragile if caught without the barriers. Has a medium amount of damage output, but it's made to run around and dodge attacks while gradually chipping away at the enemy. It's got a very low energy consumption due to this, and can be deployed for large amounts of time.
[*][b]Special Ability[/b]: All Frameworks have a special and unique ability that they possess that makes them powerful weapons of war... however, they haven't been unlocked yet. So, for now, keep this section blank.[/list]