[quote=@Caits]
The move is over powered, when you put in into the context that it hasn't been used before, which I believe was in the post. It just seems over powered to do it by accident like that and successful on the first try. 

It's seems unnecessary and just like there's trying to be a bit of showing off. I feel that it is overpowered for a character that has just begun. 

That's it.
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Thank you Caits I know the definition of overpowered. That is not helpful in the slightest. I need to know specifically how and which components of the spell are causing the problems? This is how Dawn reacts to the fear aura, that won't change so some facade of the spell must. Which means I need to know which parts of it are problematic and which fit the situation. 

The fact that it targets a specific person, how long it lasts, that it moves with a base line of consciousness, how large it is, how difficult it is to stop, how hot and violent the flames are. Simply put all of those can't be a problem because if they were Dawn would be left with virtually no magic.

So [@Zarkun][@Expolar] next time you have a free minute if you could give me a hand figuring out what to do with this I'd really appreciate it.