[@Caits] The only thing you actually said was that the move was too OP for a new character. You didn't elaborate at all past that. Since I was set on Dawn using magic in distress (which is natural for his character) edits had to be made to the magic I used but you wouldn't tell me what edits. Over and over you just kept saying it was OP. Since he was using fire magic and you kept saying the entire thing was OP it seemed what you wanted me to do was not use magic period. If I'm going to make edits on a post of mine that has caused problems I need to understand what the problems are. It's not that you are unreasonable Caits you were just agonizingly vague with the specifics of the edits I needed to make.

EDIT: You're right, this conversation is doing no one any good after the fact. We should put it to bed and move forward with the RP.