[@Wernher] Hmm. I'll bring up a few of my thoughts here. 1. Well, you need to select a new patron deity. That's a new section of the character sheet that's been added since this thread started. 2. One thing I'll need you to do is send me a private message concerning what went down in the woods. I won't share this information with anyone. I'll explain why after you've sent me the PM. 3. The first picture is fine, but the second picture you've given for her appearance has an aesthetic that doesn't suit this roleplay. You can describe her as having masks she wears to hide those scars, or as wearing , but realize this is a very different world from most modern fantasy. 4. Finally, just remember that she does need to sincerely want to help her clan grow, and not just out of personal interest. As I said before: "Self-absorbed Chaotic Evil greedy bastards who only care about themselves don't join the Council." Evil is fine, note. Just make sure your character DOES want to help her clan. So, yeah. Check 1, 3, and 4, and send me a PM with the details of 2. Once changes have been made and the PM sent, we'll discuss whether or not you're accepted or denied. Also remember that being Abrasive, Proud, and Reckless is a potentially REALLY dangerous combination. I may end up having events happen due to your character's behavior alone. That's the sort of combination of traits that can start feuds.