[@The Survivor]Looking good, I would have preferred that you used an anime/art picture instead of something real but since I failed to mention that, you can keep it :lol
You do have a bit of derp in the equipment section tho.

[@Suku]So you are saying you're finding hard to put her into the over lore of Deaus? Just PM me and hopefully we can work something out/explain somethings.

[@Evil Snowman]I will admit I didn't expect someone Egyptian descent on a not-Asia planet. xD
If you want, you can either change her entire name or just her last name, or keep it, all up to you.
As for the sheet itself, I like it; laughed a bit at the traits section :lol

[@Dead Cruiser]I like it. Although Imperia is not a vassal city-state of anyone; its the capital of the Empire.
The only other minor issue I have with your sheet is that I thought your guy was dripping blood everywhere he walked which was a very interesting aesthetic I will admit xD
Don't worry about actually having to change it though, I was just doing a double-take.

[@Damiann47]Accepted, have a gift:

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Also @All, slight modification to the scifi CS. "Race" has been removed since I will admit I was trying to be a smartass and test people with that one, one of the first things in the OP said that the Primarch had removed the concept of religion and ethnicity/race. My bad >.>