Okay, first round of feedback, here it goes~ [@sassy1085] It's a bit too short. Sticking to the basics is a-okay, but there's not much to work with in terms of personality and biography. If you could expand on it and maybe spruce it up a little, that'd be awesome :)! [@SleepingSilence] Loving the contrast xD @him having an intimidating aura but actually being insecure. Everything looks good to me ^^ just make sure he doesn't shy away too much from interaction, since we will need that to progress the RP and stuff~ [@Leoven] I don't have a problem with the connection, and everything looks a-okay! What is this mysterious package though :0? [@DJAtomika] A cop, wonderful xD. Things are going to get serious, so having someone with experience along would be grand. He's got an interesting team too, I don't see anything that needs to be changed. [@Draconequis] It looks good to me ^^ but I might have to ask you to put her mons in Pokeballs. Otherwise, they'd be out at all times and with several characters and Pokemon around, the presence of too many at once might make scenes a tad chaotic. [@LowKey123] 10-year-old Pokemon Master D8< OUT WITH YOU. jk jk, she looks okay to me ^^ and I don't see anything that needs changing. [hr] Okayyyyy, If anyone is still working on their sheet, I'll wait a bit before picking out the final cast :). [@Arista],[@Jpp188],[@OneWayOut],[@13 Critics], tell me if you guys are still interested and we'll chill for a bit as we wait. And [@tobiax] Don't forget to re-ping me if you update you sheet. I'll get to the PMs in a bit, but so far so good, guys!