Damn it, Jim! Anywho, that's better. Never be afraid to add more, even if it feel repetitive to what other players said. We want your characters perspective. Like I would have started Red cleaning one of the nasty rooms until she heard that familiar call from Snow that gets Red's blood boiling. Her and Snow may not be on good terms. Then she marches in and plays the dutiful maid and notices the new recruit that drips on her carpets. You'll get the hang of it. Just like table top, it takes some getting used to first.