[@Damiann47]Preferably I would have people just repost it but oh well xD

Now for some comments after a quick look over of your CS:

Kind of amazed you didn't decide to take a Fisto but that was up to you :lol

Can I ask for you to put in something about the Kohrneheim and the Ennedi relations? Judging from your history and what's implied from the background information, you don't really say anything about it. PRN schools would most likely not show "the Reichmen" in a too positive light and it seems like the only contact you've had with the Ennedi is when you first got on to their planet.

Beyond that, it looks pretty good ^^