[@Ace of flames01] Just read over your profile, and I've got some feedback for you![list][*]The picture should be anime/drawn - I'm so sorry that wasn't specified! I just went back to check, and I thought it had been. [*]Please put her full name - Octavia (middle name) Zaphiris! I have one character without this, but that's because he's straight from Heaven, so he has no need for a full name. [*]There's already an angel with the ability to heal - would you consider a different ability? It would help add some diversity. [*]Reading over her biography, I'm confused. She's not the eldest, or even remotely an older princess - she has an older sister, who is the oldest. They have no younger siblings aside from Octavia. The throne's inheritance is by age first and foremost, and marriage second. Also, princes and princesses are expected to marry either other royalty or within the court, so she'd never be free of her status. Whether she ends up in a position to take a throne would not change that she'd be taking the same lessons as her siblings, and even if she's disobedient, she'd be disciplined and still have to attend lessons on proper decorum and politics.[/list] I'm not refusing your profile, but I'd appreciate if you took these things into consideration! I otherwise really like her character; the twins are withdrawn from their people, and the kingdom could use a princess who is close with them to help make sure their voices are heard.