[@Archangel89]Your character looks good, just take the time to adapt it into Attis' character sheet/ Crossroad's setting. I'd maybe try to expand a little bit on his personality section, if that's not too much of a hassle. Liiiike maybe take your skill's list and adapt that in his personality? 

Other than that, I would just change your persona's skills to beginner level, and maybe age up your character to HS senior/college age? [s]I'm not too sure how hell bent our lord GM is set on the age thing, so I'll check with him if he doesn't see this first.[/s]

But anyway! Otherwise, I really like your character and his background, etc. etc.