[@Archangel89]

Unfortunately, it looks like there are a few things that need addressed. 

[list]
[*]We have a three paragraph minimum for the personality section, as well as a three paragraph minimum for the background section. You meet neither requirements.
[*]Your persona is on the list of personas that are [i]not[/i] to be used. That's why we said in the guidelines to message a GM about your persona before you make the choice.
[*] Your persona does not have Arcana, Strengths, History or Weaknesses listed. 
[*] A lot of these issues would be solved if you had used the character sheet we have up on the first post in the OOC, as well as read the rules/guidelines.
[*] I have concerns. [/list]
 
[quote] "Ito is wholly aware of this and uses said presence to make others do whatever he wants." 
"Ito can make almost anyone believe everything he says." [/quote]

While I fully embrace the idea that not all characters are [i]good[/i] people, and very much enjoy the fact your character is a manipulative son of a gun, this feels like it's brushing pretty close to power playing territory. If Ito were to be accepted, the ability to make others do what he wants all the time would not just be a given. Which, I'm sure is obvious! But it's important enough to clarify.