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[@RedNightHunter]

Here is a link to your app, so people can read it: [url]http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/92419-the-world-of-blood-compact-accepting-apps-in-oc/char#post-3428308[/url]

The changes are much better. I noticed you said the females of your vampires can get pregnant. In that case, I have to classify your vampires as half-vampires. They are clearly not fully dependent on blood, and they are technically still alive enough to procreate naturally. Therefore, they are not going to have as powerful abilities as other vampire bloodlines, sorry. I'll allow that Nia has developed some resistance to their Iron weakness, but overall Amethyst vampires do not heal very well. Also, because they can reproduce, I think they should be long-lived, but not truly 'immortal.' 

As far as their behavior goes, they seem to me to be quite feral, almost werewolf-like, in the way they roam and have territories. Perhaps you should completely switch them to a class of werewolf instead of vampire, since werewolves can procreate naturally as well. Up to you if you think that is too drastic a change. 

The foul-breath ability that the female amethyst vampires have is probably not going to be as useful as you think. There are some vampires that do not need to breathe. Foul-breah power would certainly work on living things though. 


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 Oh oops I the pregnant paragraph was for a different species thanks for pointing that out. Either they find a child or bite a person several times on the neck and wrists. They cannot actually get pregnant.