Alright without further delay it is now time for the Reviews! 

[@DontCallMeZelda]
Looks pretty good. I really just want you to clean it up a little it up a little bit. Like the stuff in gray like[u] Everyone has a history. I want a good idea of where they are coming from and where they are going are in [/u] erase those words and within the boundaries of that [noparse][indent][color=7d7d7d]  ~~~~  [/color][/indent][/noparse] In that space marked by the ~~~ You would place your information so that it becomes formatted properly. Once you do that I don't see any other problems of major concern.
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Your Biography/Background section will now look something like this, which looks much neater.
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Born in a small town in Zone 2, Jyne spent most of her early childhood wasting the days away with her lovable dog, Cho. Jyne and Cho were inseparable. Jyne did not know the full story of why she was given her best friend but as a small child she did not object to this. But, when Jyne was born, her mother actually passed away in childbirth due to other complications than her health. Her father raised Jyne and spent every day looking in her eyes and only seeing his wife. Due to this, her father never remarried and thus she had no siblings. In order to help her cope with this preemptively, her father bought Jyne the runt of a German shepherd litter and the two instantly became best friends. Her father homeschooled Jyne as he did not want her to leave his sight. However, the Moonmen would prove to complicate that. Or so she thought it was the Moonmen.

When Jyne was about 9 something attacked her town. The result was not pretty as most would have guessed. Her father got her to an safe zone but ended up getting himself killed in trying to save her. As a child, she was able to understand death as she watched her life shatter before her eyes. When she was extracted, she and her dog Cho were put in foster care. It was only then that things would prove to get complicated for her. Her body started to change and her powers started to show in great force. Due to her unstable powers, her faithful and lovable best friend Cho was taken from her. Cho was put down in front of her tear filled eyes as the parents believed her dog to be some kind of catalyst for the strange powers. She proved to be too unstable for her first foster family and they put her back up for adoption.

A second family took her in when she was about 14 and they proved to not want to handle her powers either. This family sent her to get tests and screenings as the people were afraid she was some kind of monster or a proxy of some kind. She tested negative for any kind of monster likeness but she did test positive for something else... Everyone has a history. I want a good idea of where they are coming from and where they are going. [/color][/indent]
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[@Fabricant451]
Everything looks good on my end. Hmm never really thought about what would happen in Korea but it makes sense that I would fall relativity earlier since it's still attached to the mainland and thus experienced the full brunt of the assault. Anyway accepted!
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[@LostDestiny]
It's a good start but I'm going to ask you to flesh it out just a little bit more. I'm going to ask that you add some more to the history and the personality sections give em a little bit more life to them look at some of the others that were accepted if you want a better idea of what I'm aiming for. I want to have a good idea of your character what makes them the person they are, and how their history has shaped them into what they are today. Beside that everything else is pretty okay, and I would probably classify her as Speed type as the teleportation sort of lends itself to that. Anyway once you flesh her out a bit more I'll look her over again and hopefully all will be well!
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[@Nerevarine]
You know I really like the idea, I've read about the Dekasegi before but never actually seen anyone do anything with them before. Anyway everything looks good on this side of things Accepted!
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[@TheWindel]
The only real problem I see is that she has well two abilities instead of one. Her counter act and the black sand. You either will have to cut one of them or figure out a nifty way of tying them together. Maybe like the sand sort of acts like a shield that when they hit it strikes back at them and if she wants she can expand it forward to do it's all devouring thing or something else or if you just want to cut one out. Whatever really suits your boat. Once you figure that little thing out all shall be well!
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[@KoL]
Actually everything looks pretty good on my end! I like how her ice powers are different form the standard far in that you know it's terrible for everyone including her! I think that fits well with the general overall theme of suckiness that this is probably going to fall into. Just a quick question to clarify for me and then we will all be good. Where the Russian's a military detachment in Japan at the time or did she somehow cross the East China Sea? Just wondering for clarification purposes. Once you answer that all should be good!
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[@Dead Cruiser]
Nope I don't oppose it just expect me to be a little bit more harsh in the reviewing process most likely. Just because of the rarity factor, I want to see a really good CS lol.

I would go with either or in terms of telepathy and psychokinesis. Powers are typically one thing so you can have psychokinesis but have layers within that psychokinesis as you can do more things with it and get more better trained with it. But I would considered telepathy and psychokinesis to be two different powers instead of under one banner if you catch my drift. 

And yeah strange hair and eye colors could certainly be a thing.