[quote=@Hexaflexagon] [@KoL] Actually everything looks pretty good on my end! I like how her ice powers are different form the standard far in that you know it's terrible for everyone including her! I think that fits well with the general overall theme of suckiness that this is probably going to fall into. Just a quick question to clarify for me and then we will all be good. Where the Russian's a military detachment in Japan at the time or did she somehow cross the East China Sea? Just wondering for clarification purposes. Once you answer that all should be good! [hr] [/quote] Thank you, Yuuna is a legacy character from a Madoka Magica RP, which is probably why she fits so well. In fact, the full scale of her misery can't be appreciated without the irony of the wish system. Anyway, enough rambling, if the issues that you had were only those, I've already fixed them (along with the typos from my hasty typing/as well as added some extra clarifications) and posted her already. I hope she's of your liking now.