[@Potter]
Yup looks great!
Her animagus form is a wolf right, She and Oliver are probably good friends seeing as they're both animagus and enjoy flying :D!

[@Jake]
It looks good so far, 
just a few nit picky things; You have to choose a color and make the words that color(see the examples)
also The gringotts goblins wouldn't let a wizard in training intern exactly, perhaps he could work at someplace else, maybe a certain store in knock-turn alley(which would also make his finding of dark magics more believable)(this is just a sugestion)
I can't wait to see the rest of it!