[@Eklispe] Okay, I just HAVE to link this song because of your character application. With that done, let's proceed to the judgement. [youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XT13ijUfSts[/youtube] 1. Go ahead and check for typos. I noticed "brown her" written instead of "brown hair." Nothing major, but if you're a nitpicker like me, you may want to perfect your app. 2. The armor and shield belong in the Estate section, not the backstory. I'd also like to know what sort of armor you were thinking of having her wear. I mentioned to Lauder what sort of technology is available in this era already, and I can post that information again if you'd like. The Heavy Armors section lists chain mail and scaled armor, which is probably what you'll be using, but you can totally spikify that stuff. 3. Make sure to use paragraph breaks in the RP itself. I only say this because the background is a big block of text. 4. SHE WRASSLED A BEAR HELL YES 5. Overall, I like this character and her goals. So, my final verdict... Accepted! But clarify what sort of armor you wanted her to have before you post the character, and make the changes I noted. Also, feel free to vote right now. Like, rinnao.