Looks good! Very exciting. The only thing I'd point out, which I admit wasn't clear in the writing, was that Aust killed the Magus only after everyone had left. I actually asked what spell FateWeaver's character was casting on the Magus, and he'd said that he was just making it look like he wasn't about to cruelly kill the poor guy. Other than that I see no problems at all. How badly did he injure Lothren, you think? Did he just hit him once or cave in his face?