[quote=@Ariamis] [@Ammokkx] I'm not going to enforce a posting order, but I can allow edits to be made on posts if they would result in more faithfulness to the character's personality and how they would actually act. If you feel like Serah would have stayed to listen to Lora instead of heading off like she did, then I'm fine with this particular change. [/quote] Alright, thanks. This clears up a lot. I'm actually going to edit it in like that, because it would be a Serah thing to do. EDIT: Though, she IS going to ignore the orders and listen to Harold instead.