[quote=@Kafka Komedy] Yeah yeah that's what I meant, either have her demon-type form as a style, or a DT. Okay, the changes to Mary are complete. This should be the final draft. Hopefully. You can review her again back at where I posted her in the OOC. Thanks. [/quote] Looks fine, just one last thing, and it's making a specific field/dot point for Devil Trigger to make it clearer, once that's done it should be ready to update. [quote=@I-Am-X] Oh? So he was locked in just the demon world, eh? Since I'm not familar with Mundus, I wasn't sure how he operated or how he ruled over the demons, and wasn't sure if he was the type that would tolerate people working under him to work for/ or potentially change allegiances. Not super-serious, eh? Whew, explains it. LOL [/quote] Mundus should be fine as long as your first allegiance is to him. Generally right now he's looking to ways to get out of the demon world and into the human realm, so that's something to do if you have great loyalty to him.