[quote=@Sho Minazuki] Looks fine, just one last thing, and it's making a specific field/dot point for Devil Trigger to make it clearer, once that's done it should be ready to update. Mundus should be fine as long as your first allegiance is to him. Generally right now he's looking to ways to get out of the demon world and into the human realm, so that's something to do if you have great loyalty to him. [/quote] Yea, her first allegiance is to him with her working with the Queen coming when being sealed. Then again, considering this is a demon general character, I'm not sure of what to put her age so I just put a ???. Or how long she been working with the queen, considering you said he's only been locked in the demon world. As for the last bit, she's obedient but not exactly loyal, as in she'll only do whats expected/asked of her and nothing more depending on the person that is. Though, she could always aim to aid him get out to improve her chances of promotion or whatever. Lol Oh, added in some attacks. [b]Zalmonah[/b]: [list] [*] Pierce [Lv. 1]: A simple piercing thrust with her spear [*] Ragdoll [Lv. 1]: Strikes with spear and throws opponent into air, ripping up their insides [*] Batter Up! [Lv. 1]: An attack where she simply uses the spear as a bat, with the focus being on the barbs of the spear sticking onto the foe and causing external wounds. [/list] [b]Sodom and/or Gomorroah[/b]: [list] [*] Double Slash [Lv. 1]: Basic slash with [i]both[/i] of the short swords [*] Leaping Slash [Lv. 1]: A forward leaping slash that has her going airborne, used as a setup. Can be done with either blade [*] Moon Fall [Lv. 1]: Slashes them up and down in an arc. Single blade attack [*] Down Wind Slash [Lv. 1]: A downward aerial slash, can be done with either or both blades. [/list]