[@SleepingSilence] Hello! Glad to see you've revised your profiles! We would have responded sooner, but we like to go over profiles together and try to cut down on waiting time for profile reviews. Regarding Erebus, I have a few concerns regarding his ability.[list][*]His ability should not be limitless - it has strengths, weaknesses, and limits. [*]Mentokinesis - or mind control - can knock people unconscious, alter memories, make people more agreeable, alter perceptions, and be used to attack people mentally, not unlike some forms of telekinesis. [*]In reference to "strong/holy wills", they [i]do[/i] make a difference. Not necessarily holy, but strong? That refers to a mental barrier, which he would have to focus on breaking down before he can do affect the person. [*]Unless you discuss it with the player and the GMs beforehand, you'll only be able to influence NPCs and your own character. This is to avoid godmodding.[/list] I like that there are rumours surrounding his age and past - he certainly would not be as old as Lucifer, but that doesn't stop people from speculating. Very exciting! He sounds like a tyrant, which is even better for as to why Lucifer has remained sealed off as it has. In regards to Eros, I like the limit you've put on his ability. Having to sacrifice something of equal value in order to use his ability is perfect. The only things I want to mention is that if Eros was exorcised, he wouldn't have appeared in Lucifer - he would have returned to Hell first. The other thing is that if he's in the army, he's most likely a warrior, not a servant! Please consider what weapon he would use in battle and add that to his profile. If you think he would have been knighted, however, put him down as a knight. Knights typically use a sword, whereas warriors are more versatile when it comes to weapons.