[@Wisp] Well one thing I was going to do, (as a secret) The reason he is so powerful, is because he is the king. So the powers made sense from a story standpoint. but one weakness he was going to have is, for actual fighting and strength wise, he is essentially crippled. I don't like outright saying character's weaknesses because, it makes people more likely to "PLAYER KNOWLEDGE" the RP. Things that players know, that characters shouldn't. But I DO always have weaknesses in mind when making my characters. I was just going to pm you my weaknesses if you needed them, forgot to mention it. >.> But I understand your concern. My main point, was its hard to resist the effects themselves. A stronger will, would probably be effected for less time, I can clarify this. I did have one sentence mentioning, when he is trying to effect people outside his kingdom, its a lot less effective. (which I can also re-add.) As for Eros, well it's not that he didn't appear in hell. It's just that he 'awoke' in the kingdom. So I don't necessary think you can't assume that already happen. But I can add a throwaway sentence if you'd like. I didn't give him a single weapon because, he can create them with his power. But if I 'NEED' a weapon, I can add one. I will change him to a 'knight' since you're right that it would make more sense.