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Absolutely!

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Overall, I can't see anything exceptionally wrong with your character.  The only big complaint I have is that it's a bit of a mess.  Can we rely on you to double-check your spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization in the future?
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Yea spoken to Sho and realise it needs doing up.
Kinda annoying to do on a phone though so will take some time