[quote=@Lord Wraith] In the same way one doesn't read a whole novel in one sitting. [/quote] Mmm, that's some delicious saltiness. My bio came out that long because the beginning scene is what inspired the entire personality of the character. I told, in one sitting, what I felt was necessary for the audience to know to paint a picture of the factors that most affected Llavi's life. I tried to stray from simple tropes, and I'm a verbose person, thus the length was born. But I don't apologize for it in the slightest because I feel it's at least somewhat quality story telling with a decent narrative. So, tl;dr: [img]https://49.media.tumblr.com/73e8d5ec1acf25f9770424378e9220f2/tumblr_nyanah8klS1ql5yr7o1_500.gif[/img] [quote=@Lord Wraith] While it might be a bit harder to play in the long run, there's definitely nothing wrong with playing a strategic character. Although her advanced probability could also allow her to pull off some crazy attacks by being able to see chain reaction events. IE If I hit that fire extinguisher it will sail into that wall, knocking that loose brick free which will then hit Character X in the head. [/quote] This is actually what I was totally thinking she could develop into. Slightly akin to TypicalMainCharacterWhoIsn'tGary from Alpha's