[quote=@Polyphemus]
Room for one more?
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Seeing as very few people joined, sure.


[@FantasyChic] Good character, but a few things stood out to me;

1). I'm curious about the strength of these "telekinetic bullets." Like, do they hit with the strength of usual bullets? Or are they more like throwing a rock? I'm a tad unsure since you were rather brief with that aspect.

2). The backstory - specifically the way it starts - is a tad confusing to me. Because... you started it with her power manisfesting... but worded like there should be something before it.

3). Also, you don't [i]need[/i] to put relations to friends and family (Or NPCs) in the dynamics section - since it's supposed to refer to other characters, rather than just whoever. You [i]can[/i] keep it if you make a separate section (I put it in a hider in another rp).