[quote=@Unoedipal]
[@Moonman]
I'd like some justification for the STR and END parameters, since they're unusually high. Moreso on END, really. I won't veto it, but I'd like to hear your reasoning. 

Raise Riding by a rank since a Rider with C rank Riding isn't really a thing. 

Make Leper's Curse rankless (just use a "-" in place of the rank). I applaud you for actually putting in a largely detrimental skill, it's always nice to see that. 

You can put his horse in Weapons, since it's similar to Medusa's pegasus in that it isn't a Noble Phantasm, but just a mount. 

Regarding the Noble Phantasm, what are the knights? Are they Heroic Spirits, wraiths, or what?
[/quote]

- Baldwin's exceptional Strength and Endurance are (aside from compensating for his intentionally dreadful other parameters) meant to represent his portrayal in history to an extent. Before the leprosy kicked in, Baldwin was noted to be physically able far beyond his years, and in excellent health (hah). 

Even when he was 16 (by which point he was partially paralyzed), he was still able to fight proficiently, a feat that was and still is regarded as superhuman. For Endurance in particular, it's mostly due to his convictions (it worked for Spartacus, right?) and the leprosy deadening his nerves and toughening his skin.

-Noted and done. Refluffed the description for his Riding skill a bit.

-Ditto.

-Ditto.

-Wraiths, I suppose. Rather than fully recreating the army present at Montgisard, it recreates an event that occurred during it. They can't act or fight independently beyond what is described. Basically, think less Ionioi Hetairoi and more angry Catholic tidal wave.