[@Minimum]: There's several issues with the CS. The first thing is the powers as Aftermath, unlike most Starwars rps, have a fixed list of abilities acceptable for use in this RP located in the OP. Since you missed it, I'll link it here: [url=http://goo.gl/eXNBTa]link![/url]. His appearance needs work as I doubt he would be in his armor 24-7, which means he's got an appearance that includes a height, built, hair color, eye color, etc. The mention of 

[quote]Interest in sith history and archeology[/quote] 

is oddly placed or better wording might be: Has knowledge in Sith history and archeology. If this is your first Advance rp, I suggest you put a lot more details in your CS because this is basically a outline of the character you're showing to the GMs, including how you're going to likely play him, his role in the story, what direction you want to, etc as this makes things a lot easier for us. Now... for the GM duty parts. *picks up Sledge hammer of Thor proportions and spear like chisel* Time to get to work. 

[@Sep]: If I'm not back, know I was buried by the new interest and send a rescue party in a few days! :hehe 

Though seriously, I enjoy all my players and happy people are interested. I tease because I care.