[@MMGiru] Just wanna let you know that I have seen your sheet and I do plan to review it once my migraine goes away. [quote=@Bishop] [@MMGiru] Your description of him as muscly doesn't add up to the weight and height. Add a few kg->muscle mass=kg. Also if you would like, add another 1 or 2 chakra natures. It doesn't affect you in anyway but it gives you more of a variety to choose from. [/quote] Actually, he doesn't describe him as "muscly", but as "with more muscle than academics" which just means that he actually does have [i]some[/i] muscle, since he does something with his body rather than sit around and read all day ... I think..? As for the advice of adding several chakra natures... You do realize that we're aiming for very lowly skilled ninja here, right? Because using several types of chakra is definately not lowly skilled. Mastering two chakra natures is at least chuunin level and three is at least Jounin. Mastering, or even using, chakra types of a different nature than the one that comes, well, naturally to someone is not something that is easily done, after all.