[@Renny] Maybe because my opinion matters to you, which is nice. 

You put more effort in appearance and clothing than I did. Very descriptive. Very nice. Your personality is all over the place; I understood enough, but it's one of those things where I'd need to see how he acts in a roleplay to fully get. There's just a lot of things to absorb in those paragraphs. The Likes and Dislikes are diverse enough to appreciate and, while a minor thing, I did like that he doesn't enjoy sweets--don't ask me why, I just had to appreciate that the littlest thing could make me appreciate him more. 

I thought the fear of vermin was funny, since working in the mines would probably have most people getting used to seeing them. Fearing Galatec is also reasonable, and could really add something to his development later as he fights. 

History was straightforward and, believe me, I appreciate a straightforward history more than anything. It's probably the least favorite thing I ever want to fill in any CS, ever. 

Talents, Hindrances, and the Bonus Round Section are all great stuff. I'm looking forward to seeing how you use him in the actual game.