[@Hantu Kongkek]

You haven't changed MAN to D or LCK to B. 

C rank MR is still too high for someone with his recency, unless you want to argue that he was exposed to magi. It should probably be D. 

There is no canon Servant that has A rank Military Tactics. Neither Alexander the Great, Attila the Hun, Julius Caesar, nor Oda Nobunaga have it; they all have B. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying Jackson was bad, but I am saying that he doesn't deserve the highest rank in the skill that we've ever seen, especially considering the people that would put him above. 

The problem with Specie Circular is that it's too far reaching. Noble Phantasms are crystallizations of feat and can function symbolically, but even in a case where they're doing that, it doesn't generate such a disjunct to where "I stopped a bank" is able to turn into "I have an item that seeks out and moves to stop any antagonistic interference". It makes even less sense since its an action of the cane to defend Jackson and not an action of Jackson himself. 

Besides that, Jackson is really not someone who should be getting a second Noble Phantasm in Japan. He's a recent Heroic Spirit who's necessarily low in mystery, and he's about as far out of his Staging Ground as it gets. I'm not utilizing a codified fame system since those things are hell, nor am I banning Servants that have access to guns on face, but that makes me even more hesitant to accept a pretty heavily wanked NP than I would otherwise because I'm already granting leeway.