There is a detriment to just copy-pasting without going through what you are copy-pasting for typos. No offense. Not trying to bash here or tell you what to do. Thought I would pop on in and give you a little bit of advice and input. 

For instance, for HP you put that HP is determined by 10 + 2x Vitality, yet you forgot to take out the fact that Strength helps you determine HP since in my original it was 10 + 2x Vitality + 2x Strength that determined HP. 

Also kind of sad you changed Fisticuffs to Melee Brawler. I liked that name xD

Also Intelligence... " Intelligence also increases The spiritual strength of your character's very being and soul increasing MP"

I am not trying to bash you down or anything, but there is a very definite reason why I made the Spirit Stat in my RP. 

If INT does 50 things, then there becomes no reason to not put everything into INT. 

From that sentence it means that INT not only assists in Magic, but spiritual abilities as well if you plan on having those. 

INT essentially becomes overpowered since it raises your MP, gives you more Talent Points, etc.  Unless of course you are having that INT no longer gives you more Talent Points. In that case, you may want to change that. 

Other things... look good? I mean I have just glanced at it and don't really know the full extent of your plans, so it looks good so far. Looks like you really took things down to the bare, which isn't too bad.

I may make a CS soon, but if I don't then I may just pop in occasionally and watch what is happening, perhaps your RP will help me get ideas to help better balance and improve my original system.