I like how we think similarly but don't copy each other. [quote=@Kouki][i]“Four targets left, their intelligence is low but I knew that already, Remember, even in my ranger suit, I'm not a tank, I'll need to make use of their weak mindedness and avoid a head on confrontation.”[/i] They closed in quickly. [i]“Dodge, don't block!”[/i] He dashed backwards to avoid an incoming punch from the next Githkin to close the distance, firing twice into its chest before splitting into two. [/quote] [quote=@alexfangtalon][i]*Remember what mentor said. I'm faster than they are and should dodge not block.*[/i] With that advice in mind Ollie bob and weaved around the Githkin working like a boxer against a tougher opponent.[/quote] We both use the holographic projection for the same base purpose but we go about it differently in our execution. I can clearly see the talent of a boxer in your writing. I enjoyed seeing your character's fighting style and comparing our different executions of the same ability. [quote=@Kouki][i] He dashed backwards to avoid an incoming punch from the next Githkin to close the distance, firing twice into its chest before splitting into two. “Now, misdirection!”[/i] Both greens dashed forward to strike, one going airborne to come down on the alien soldier with a superman punch. The soldier held up its hands to block but felt nothing when the airborne ranger dispersed into light and it was instead faced with a round of laser fire- [/quote] [quote=@alexfangtalon][i]*Crap. There are too many of them. Gotta distract 'em.*[/i] Suddenly four other green rangers appeared to distract the Githkin. The Githkin didn't know which one to attack so they swung wildly at all of them making it even easier for Ollie to avoid the hits.[/quote] Very good, there were one or two grammatical errors but this is the casual section so I don't think it'll be a huge problem down the line. I can't wait to see who gets the projector and who gets the shield!