[quote=@ProPro]
They melt. Like, they turn into protein goo and wash away.
[/quote]

......So, let me get this right...

These minions are stronger than average, beat us up in normal mode, are still tough in ranger mode and turn to ooz when destroyed.... 

I think some one might like the Power Rangers movie more than I do.

[@alexfangtalon]

[i]Did they actually suspect him to be one of the rangers.[/i]
This should end in a question mark, not a period.

[i]*Oh crap. What happened*. [/i]
Again, question mark, not period.

[i]"Hey, are you alright."[/i]
Once more, the ole question mark should go here....because it's a question..

[i]How can humanity live like this."[/i]
That question mark still not makin an appearance...

[i]They didn't hurt you did they."[/i]

[b]AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!![/b]
*flips table*

Ya know what, go through your story and please check your punctuation.....just...check your punctuation..

Other than that, you have-

[i]"Crap," Ollie knelled down beside the man while making sure no Githkin were watching, [/i]
“knelt” not “knelled “

And there are a few others, maybe you wanna skim over it yourself. It's small things but it's enough small things that they add up.