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Erm...
Well...
A few things stand out that are a bit... Iffy.

First off: Berserk mode and friendly fire. Seems like a risk factor that would've been taken into account before the events that you see in the prologue here, so I'd find it unlikely that she'd be picked if there was even a remote chance that things could be even more FUBAR after she's brought in.

Second: Ability to demolish a good chunk of a city single-handedly as collateral. That is... An issue. A big issue. Especially coupled with the first problem.

Next: Arsenal. "Piece flesh" is a pretty bad frame of reference when we're looking at thing many, MANY times more durable than that.
Also, carrying rockets is kinda... Suboptimal, don'tcha think? At least, not without a suitable hammerspace bag or pack mule to drag along... Which, you know, can be a pretty big liability.
There's also that eye, because you have to factor the existence of magic in many worlds into the equation. In a perfectly science-driven (aka 'normal') world, that's okay. But... Yeah.
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Oh whoops. Seems like I forgot to get rid of a few things to edit the thing.

The Berserk mode was originally implemented into the original RP based off her actions done in the movies. I can easily get rid of it.

The city thing is again, part of the lore. Easily can get it out.

(Edit: Got both things out)

Um, Piece flesh? Not sure what you mean by that. Also Kiryu does have boosters on her back (like in the movies), so again its another nod to the original. And the problem with that eye is what exactly? If you don't like it, I can easily get rid of it too. Just saying.

Also, this is her full body too for reference:

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