[@SoleAccord]I don't think it shows. If you were being lazy, I didn't notice which might just mean I have crappy taste but I'm choosing to believe that this was just a really good sample.

Plus, I like how Galatec wasn't being overtly evil in your story because that's how I see them. I don't see them as like devils that whip their slaves and carry out public executions. The point of their invasion, as I see it at least, was to take over the world and use it to conduct business using the people of earth as slaves and they accomplish that by not using monstrous force but eloquent manipulation. I just don't see them being openly evil and riling people up.