[quote=@Kangutso] So, still having trouble even starting my post on titanpad. I am at the point where i feel the need to ask: Can someone give a me word/sentence to start with?(preferably the latter) Kyre is currently on the moon, and all he can see from there on Galbar is the land being changed, both in form and color(spreading plant-life, new bodies of water). [/quote] "Galbar was changing, and for the life of him, Kyre didn't know if it was for better or worse." After that you can just launch into describing all that has changed from Kyre's point of view :lol