[@Zelosse] first thing that strikes me is that you made the same mistake Sector did in not putting a description of the appearance with his age and stuff. All you did was put a picture. Which is fine if you did it like Dndragons and posted pictures with facial features such as eye color and hair color. But since you posted only a vague image, you'll need to describe his appearance.

Also, please remove the "character skeleton" hider

Those are the only things I can see. Remedy those and then I will give you the go ahead to post it in the cs section.