[quote=@Raijinslayer] [@Expolar][@Caits]Okay, firstly, thanks for catching that mistake Expolar, I really need to proofread my stuff more. Secondly, to respond to Expolar's second question, my idea for this character at the start was that he'd be attempting to start his own guild in the long run(which he still might try later on) in order to better protect the Elysium Crown. Now, I'm thinking more towards him running from his brother and possibly have a bit of an arc focusing in on that, since it could involve a lot of people. What I hope for him to so in this is learn Not to rely on Set, hence why I have him Divine Words, so as to give him another way to defend himself, though on second thought, it can be a bit too strong, even when used outside of his Set form, so I might switch out for something else. Also, in response to Crimson's earlier comment about lack of unified theme amongst the abilities, I can see where he got that impression. However, Set is an aspect of Serapis that can be considered interchangeable if Sera ever gets a new god that's less dangerous to people around him. The theme for Sera was that of the Egyptian concept of a Pharoh, a god in human form who commanded the world with undeniable authority. While the Scepter gives access to this domination of magic, it's only a conduit for a skill that technically all of the old blood have, but none can really use anymore. As such, it's practically sealed with the staff. As for power levels, I thought I balanced the Divine Words better than I really did, should probably make the cost of the more manipulative stuff cost a bit more to cast. Set's abilities, while strong, have two drawbacks. First, it takes time to build up to a particularly threatening level of power, as the energy flows into him at a steady rate. Second, Set isn't someone that Serapis wants to release on the world, and in all but the most dire of circumstances, he'll likely cut the power flow off at the 50-60% mark, as that's when Set possessing him complete is more likely to begin, his mind slowly becoming overcome by the god's stength of presence. This puts a self-imposed limitation on how powerful he can actually get, which is A-Rank with the words, and Mid-upper B without. [/quote] As for somthing else to defend himself with, being good with a weapon, or weapons, is both reasonable, and a good solution. [s]Bah, Kane Chronicles knockoff[/s] *cough* I, personaly, am sceptical of "self-imposed limitations" because we know that that's just for a time when he needs it to make a comeback. Its...kinda like transforming into the Hulk for plot. However, if this is very similar to the Kane Chronicals, then the same rules still apply, imperfect host makes it harder for the god to channal his power. Serapis doesn't seem to be a good host for Set, so my thought is that even if Set is released, he could be defeated by a powerful mage, or group of mages. How does that sound?