[@MMGiru]
Thank you very much for your feedback! Even if you aren't a GM, your opinion matters just as much as Halvtand's does - more actually, since Halvtand is a grumpy, old man.
The issue both Halvtand and myself have with my writing was not the fact that the English was bad, because, well, my English is damn good. It was the fact that the artistic talent put into the writing was very ... [i]limited[/i]. The actual writing was bad, even if the language was good. I hope that explains it.
As for the other things... I did/do plan on elaborating on the split in the Hisokana clan, but since my writing sucks, I couldn't do it without it being awful. So I felt somewhat satisfied with just slapping a WIP tag on it and at least posting [i]something[/i].
The nickname was meant to be simply that. I have a nickname that is simply part of my name, because my name is quite long and people found/find it funny to take out part of my name that means something else. Although Sawaru is not exactly long, I found it believable that someone might at some point have realized that the last "part" of her name translates to "evil" when standing alone. I could add something about someone pointing this out to her at school or something, if that makes you happy ;)


[@alexfangtalon] and [@Hillan]
Halvtand and I will discuss your characters and we'll get back to you.

Also, just so everyone doesn't think I'm the laziest Co-GM in existence (although I likely am), I have been Skyping with Halvtand this entire time, so I have been helping out with the judging of your characters.