[quote=@ADParis]
I don't know whether to be [i]intimidated [/i]or [i]thrilled [/i]that there are at LEAST [b]10 different people[/b] (including me) working on this. The most people I've ever RP'd with is 4-5, and I'm still definitely more used to just one-on-one, even after.. months? 

Not gonna drop out or anything of course, but.. [i]jeez[/i] hello there people. xD

[s]i'm awful at talking i'm sorry i don't know why I bothered writing this[/s]

ALSO LIKE HOW DID WE MANAGE TO GET OVER 100 OOC POSTS IN [i]A DAY[/i]
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One way to view it is that we can split up on multiple adventures at once. So more action.

As for the post, as long as the no of posts a day doesn't extend to the IC then I'm happy. I know Gowi mention he'll control the pace. I just can't keep up with the super Speed posting and prefer longer detailed stuff. 

[quote=@Gowi]
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Without a Mech CS alongside it I cannot give much of a proper review, but I can tell you that a lot of what I see here is a unfortunate [i]mess[/i]. Alongside the grammar errors and fluidity of the descriptions there is also a backstory that is pretty “out there” even for the anime sheen I’ve given NC Quest as the new (forum version) GM. Whilst I would have no issues with the ruthlessness shown by Margaret, there is the whole “my house collapsed on me, I woke up in the hospital, she taunted me before kidnapping me, and THEN I was ALSO tortured before being saved by my father’s friend.” – Like, I’m not trying to rip your CS to shreds here. We have a lot of minimalist sheets in this game and some more detailed ones so this isn't a case of it not being detailed enough... but this doesn’t give me a lot of confidence going forward.

If you are serious about this character, I recommend reading it over with your own eyes and creatively figuring out a way to get the character you want without having to take a hatchet to the whole thing. If that’s something you want to do and are not disheartened by my reply, then I’ll look it over again.


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Always pick one thing to focus on as a key moment for that character. Speaking to Gowi in pm I had to work out how an Australian with a pretty high tech NC would end up in a small town with a busted piece of crap. Being from a country that isn't listed as having much going on and close to the Red Star region, I used that as a motive.

Looking at Tahlia, she actually doesn't have a sad story at all. She was just forced to move and explore. Not every character suits the world of sadness and I somewhat realised that with my last character, Madison, where her creation and back story was extremely dark, and yet she was a bit of a wild character. It actually forced me to dislike her because I was playing two parts and if I simply took out the darkness, then she would be a stronger build.