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Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
Writing Quality: 7/10
Story Line Advancement: 7/10
Character Development: 6/10
Independence: 6/10 
Total: 36/50; 72%; 7 Khookies to Allure

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Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
Writing Quality: 6/10
Story Line Advancement: 4/10
Character Development: 4/10
Independence: 5/10 
Total: 29/50; 58%; 6 Khookies to Ventus

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Spelling and Grammar: 10/10
Writing Quality: 5/10
Story Line Advancement: 5/10
Character Development: 4/10
Independence: 3/10 
Total: 27/50; 54%; 5 Khookies to Loth

[@Scarifar] I'm unsure as to whether Falas is a hero or not. Please let me know.

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4 Khookies to TOBIA