[@potatochipgolem] It is a bit confusing to me, as well, but it is also pretty much what [@Vox] said. You can try it on your own skin. At extreme levels, the opposite feeling of whatever your skin is suffering will cause quite a bit of pain. [@icmasticc] No worries, thanks for the update. And that was a bummer about Batman vs. Superman. I was kind of looking forward to seeing it, and the trailers seemed promising. But now that it is getting such mixed reviews, well, I'm not sure. Then again, I thought that new Star Wars movie was terrible, but was somehow praised by rotten tomatoes and everyone else. So, I'm also not sure if I trust critics. [@smarty0114] Ah, I didn't notice your edits. The 'warfare' title appears twice in Charlie's sheet. Also, could you format your spirit in the manner suggested by Redrum? I have done so for my character as well. I can write the code for Charlie and Eliza's spirits if it looks complicated. As for Eliza, the '(no year)' marker is in her age section. You can remove it. Then there is the formatting for the spirits, but I'll help you with that if you want. Other than that, they both look good. There is quite a lot that can happen between them in the story. Testing their friendship, I think, will provide the rest of us with some really nice sub-plot reading! I love that kind of stuff, so let your creativity carry you away. Besides that, I think my character, Olivia, would get a long well with Eliza, if they would have met at some point at Oakridge. You can move them to the character tab, just make sure to take care of those tiny formatting details. [@Rockette] We spoke over PM and I commented on your character there. All is well and wonderful. Please move Monika to the character tab. [center][sub][color=d8996d]┤[/color] Everyone [color=d8996d]├[/color] [color=d8996d]▲◆◇◆◇◆◇◆◇◆◇◆◇▼[/color][/sub][/center] I just want to remind you that you can create new exotic effects for your spirits. They are by no means limited to what I have listed. Also, as Guardians constantly absorb spirits, new magical abilities form ever so often. This means that you can always add more magic to your characters as we go along, or change the current ones. The lore allows all of this to be quite fluid.