So here's what happens when someone plays Rainbow Six Ravenshield and Ghost Recon 1, and then tries to make a Star Wars roleplay based on them. I'm not a die-hard Star Wars fan, but I do enjoy its colourful universe... so here's what I've come up with, and I'd love some feedback, especially on the equipment... and also the story? Most of what I've gathered together has come from directly reading the wikis. Also, if there's someone who wants to be the Team Leader, then it's yours. Just because I'm the potential Gm of this potential Rp, doesn't mean I wanna be the top dog as it probably might be a position best reserved for someone who is a walking Star Wars encyclopaedia :D Anywhos, here goes: [center][h1][u]Star Wars: Clone Ops[/u][/h1][/center] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/SMJeuG0.png[/img][/center] [hr] [center][h2]Operation Noose[/h2][/center] [center][i]This is it gentlemen, the end is finally at hand. We were all bred for one reason; cut from the same cloth to full fill a singular purpose. Ours was never to reason why, we were not to question or criticise. We received orders, and we carried them out - from one battle to another. Many of our comrades are dead, but we're still standing... and maybe after this final campaign, we'll be allowed to ponder whether all this was worth it. Intelligence has tracked General Grievous to Utapau, where he is gathering a significant force of droids to his tattered banner. The Republic is going to hit him hard and fast, so that there's no escape for him, and so that the end of the war is brought significantly closer. There's enough of our brothers on the way to take over three whole Star Systems. There'll be no running for the General, no chance of victory. But until they get here, we're the advance party - the fly in Grievous' poisoned cocktail. Our mission is a simple one. We will be inserted via a single [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Low_Altitude_Assault_Transport/stealth]LAAT/s[/url], which will get us by the CIS early warning systems; it'll drop us right on the coast, and then it'll depart. After that, our first order of business is to knock out a local CIS Sentry Post, and more importantly, eliminate its long range sensor tower. That'll stop them from picking up the assault force that will follow in our wake. After that, we'll high tail it south, and destroy a nearby CIS AA site - that way their ability to repel a local aerial assault will be severely compromised. If we last that long, we'll move south east to immobilise a CIS tank factory; doing so will hamper any CIS attempt to mobilise a counter attack in the area. Providing we're still alive, and the CIS haven't raised the alarm, we'll head west and whack ourselves an artillery battery. With these targets taken care off, our brothers-in-arms should have no problem in securing the area. But this is first and foremost a stealth mission; we need to hit our targets hard and fast, and with precision. We need to keep our heads low, and not alert the local CIS garrison - if we do, then the jig is up, and they'll flood the whole area with reinforcements. That'll both be bad for us, and bad for those we're trying to clear the way for. Make no mistake gentlemen, this mission is going to save hundreds - maybe thousands - of lives. Our brothers are counting on us. Mission intel can be found below.[/i][/center] [hr] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/n5onKOb.png[/img][/center] [hider=Sentry Post] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/7Z19APK.png[/img][/center] [i]A long range detection tower, guarded by a squad of battle droids and a single destroyer droid. They're standing out in the open, and shouldn't be too hard to pick off from a distance. Once they're neutralised, we'll disable the tower, and be on our way.[/i][/hider] [hider=AA Site] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/1QD7wbs.png[/img][/center] [i]The CIS have installed an anti-air missile tower in the facility; just one of these could knock out several LAAT/c's in seconds. Therefore, it's our job to knock it out of the fight permanently. It's located in a forested area, and guarded by a squad of battle droids. Taking this out should be easy enough. There'll be plenty of cover for us to sneak up on them, and if we do it right, they wont see us coming.[/i][/hider] [hider=Tank Factory] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/TCUAXrg.png[/img][/center] [i]The CIS have established themselves a tank factory in the south. Even with their depeleted resourecs, they're still able to churn out droids and tanks at an astonishing rate - and this facility stands testament to that fact. We estimate it's only been operational for a day, and already it's managed to spit out a whole company worth of AAT battle tanks. Intel believes the facility to be lightly defended however, with just a couple of tanks and three battle droids guarding it. Providing we're not detected prior to our arrival, that should remain the case. Once we've knocked out the guards, we'll deactivate the factory and lace it with explosives - but wont detonate them until we've taken care of the final objective.[/i][/hider] [hider=Artillery Position] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/4VTrLQ4.png[/img][/center] [i]The CIS have a two-gun emplacement to the west, which will cause havoc for our comrades as they disembark from their LAAT/c's. Command has decided against an aerial assault, as the emplacement is well dug in and they can't guarantee that the guns will be knocked out in a bombing run. Therefore it's up to us to take them down! We'll slip in from the east, coming up behind their dug out. Intel believes that only a handful of battle droids, and some maintenance droids, are guarding the guns. Should be a peace of cake.[/i][/hider] [hr] [center][h2][u]Roles Available[/u][/h2][/center] [b]Recon Team Zulu[/b] [hider=Team Leader] X 1 Max The leader of the commando squad, this soldier is an excellent commander and naturally gifted when it comes to tactical and strategical planning. He comes equipped with the following: [list][*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/ARC_trooper_armor]ACR Trooper Armor[/url] or [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Mark_III_Katarn-class_commando_armor]Mark III Katarn-Class Commando Armor[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DC-15_blaster_rifle]DC-15A Blaster Rifle[/url] or [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DC-17m_Interchangeable_Weapon_System]DC-17M Interchangeable Weapon system[/url] (Choose mode) [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DC-17_hand_blaster]DC-17 Hand Blaster[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Electro_magnetic_pulse_grenade]EMP Grenades[/url] [*][url=http://clonewars.wikia.com/wiki/Macrobinoculars]Macrobinoculars[/url][/list][/hider] 0/1 Filled. [hider=Marksman] X 2 Max This soldier is a highly trained and efficient marksman, who relies on his ability to silence threats from great ranges. However, due to his load-out, he could find himself in trouble in a close quarters battle situation. He is equipped with the following: [list][*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Night_Ops_Armor]Night Ops Armor[/url] or [url=http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/0/0d/Clone_Scout_Trooper_01.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20070101181530]Scout Trooper Armor[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DC-15x_sniper_rifle]DC-15X Sniper Rifle[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DC-17_hand_blaster]DC-17 Hand Blaster[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/R-1_recon_droid]R1 Recon Droids[/url] [*][url=http://clonewars.wikia.com/wiki/Macrobinoculars]Macrobinoculars[/url][/list][/hider] 0/2 Filled [hider=Demolitions] X 2 Max This soldier is skilled in the use of heavy weapons and explosives, and provides the back bone of the team's fire power. His talents are invaluable to the completion of the mission. He is equipped with the following: [list][*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Phase_II_clone_trooper_armor]Phase II Clone Armor with Jetpack[/url] or [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Mark_III_Katarn-class_commando_armor]Mark III Katarn-Class Commando Armor[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/PLX-1_missile_launcher]PLX-1 Missile Launcher[/url] or [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Z-6_rotary_blaster_cannon]Z-6 Rotary Blaster Cannon[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DC-17_hand_blaster]DC-17 Hand Blaster[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/V-1_thermal_detonator]V-1 Thermal Detonators[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Detonation_pack]Detonation Packs[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/HX2_antipersonnel_mine]HX2 Anti-personnel Mine[/url][/list][/hider] 0/2 Filled [hider=Commando] X 3 This soldier is the back bone of any Republic elite force, and is an all rounder in many situations. He is equipped with: [list][*][url=http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/0/0d/Clone_Scout_Trooper_01.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20070101181530]Scout Trooper Armor[/url] or [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Katarn-class_commando_armor]Katarn-Class Commando Armor[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DC-15_blaster_rifle]DC-15A Blaster Rifle[/url] or [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DC-15S]DC-15S Blaster Carbine[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/DC-17_hand_blaster]DC-17 Hand Blaster[/url] or [url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Vibroblade/Legends]Vibroblade[/url] [*][url=http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/V-1_thermal_detonator]V-1 Thermal Detonators[/url] [/list][/hider] 0/3 Filled [hr] [center][h2][u]Character Sheet[/u][/h2][/center] [code] [b]Name:[/b] RC/CT/CR/etc -#### [b]Nick Name:[/b] [b]Appearance:[/b] All clones look the same, but some might have taken liberties with their appearance in an effort to feel more like an individual i.e beards, different hair cuts, piercings, body markings. They may also have customised their armor a little, with markings and trinkets/minor modifications. [b]Team Role:[/b] [b]Role Modifications:[/b] Equipment choices or changes made from the provided template. [b]Personality:[/b] Is your clone still a flesh-covered robot? Or has he evolved his own personality somewhat? [b]Other:[/b] Anything you feel you want to add.[/code] [hr] [center][h2][u]Rules[/u][/h2][/center] 1) Always obey the Team Leader's orders, even if they seem insane. 2) Be polite and respectful to other players at all times. 3) Respect the fact that Star War's lore is huge, and that not all players (myself included) will be fully understanding of every gizmo in existence. 4) Character sheets to be submitted to OOC for approval, and moved to the CS tab once they've gotten said approval. 5) If you need to leave the RP, please say so, don't just leave us hanging. 6) Role fulfilment is on a first come, first serve basis.