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Magecraft: Church Thaumaturgy. He had learned only that one spell that Billy now has.

Torture: If you'd like I could always change it to have been information given to Jimmy during his time in the Church. I just felt the torture and the Church attempting to make the cult commit suicide fruitlessly was a better "story" overall.

Blip on Radar: Have you [i]seen[/i] those American megachurches? Think of those, only an empire stretching across America instead of just one. That's the scale I'm thinking, with the actual "cult" being the overly enthralled believers.

Meager Energy: There is a good reason I went with "ease the burden of" instead of "supply the prana necessary to maintain" in The Lord's Link's description.

Circuits: Honestly, the whole magic section was, to me, a big "look at this shit Billy's never going to use!" buffet. The aim was to have stats that would be utterly useless, and the idea of having super few circuits that work really well was too amusing to pass. I don't mind dropping it (it's a meaningless letter to me), but I'd like your opinion after having heard my reasoning first.
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Any magecraft not called "Baptismal Sacrament" is heresy and not something the Church would teach.

It's not the biggest deal, but the Fuyuki war is so incredibly irrelevant to literally everyone in the greater world that it doesn't make sense for why it would be viewed as important. If it's just a misunderstood bit of information that the group latched onto and obsessed over, then sure, but in the Church's eyes they don't view it as a big deal.

Oh. I didn't get any semblance of that scale in the profile, but if you edit it to be clearer then it's fine, I suppose. 

At the very least, they should be contributing a sizable amount of prana through the contract to maintain the Servant, and should be in the vicinity of Fuyuki. Otherwise there's just too big of a gap there. They don't need to be crippled or comatose or whatever, but it should be a bigger contribution than just a chip.

It's fine thematically, but doesn't work as well mechanically, so in that interest I will have to ask that you lower it to B at the highest; I'd prefer C, honestly.